Torn By Love
Meager is the cryof the baby, butI have triednot to tearyour torn tissues,must ask your permission.Grandmother,I search for an amuletto bring youto soothe you. Mybeing is torn.A girl of charmnot of...
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What movement of words and emotions you have given us this morning. Such a sad, yet hopeful for the future lament. The mother/daughter gone, but she leaves behind this wonder to behold. Touching.
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A day of Revelations.Doug,There is an air of holiness about this.It reads as a rite of the Church.So very well written!Sarah
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Doug -Great use of repetition with the word 'torn'The continuous birthing of life, if you may, along with the genetic interaction of others along life's path.maryann
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Doug G. PoetIndeed, as mentioned by Poets above, everything seems so positively Biblical in proportion today!Multiple word / stanza repetitions cannot help but have one thinking Kyrielle...
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I too thought of the kyrielleI felt almost that I was in mass.This one I will read over Doug.
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